poetry response to I have seen

Aren't I a Good Thing?
This I have seen poem by sierra told about death and fear. I found it interesting and easily understandable.  I also thought that it had enough description to help find out what the I was in the poem.  I believe this poem was shown from the perspective of fear.  I think it is fear because of how "among the frightened" and "from happiness To fear" seem to mean that fear is speaking and there are many more things that show this. Overall I think that this poem was very good and that it show element of poetry along with excellent imagery.

Never Satisfied

The other poem I read by Gretta starts out by not giving away if it is happy or not.  It does seem to be somewhat happy though.  The poem shows this with phrases like "many people jump" and "deepest dreams come true" also "but sadly it won't last". That makes it lean towards a sad feeling but you can't be sure. The second group however makes the mood sad with "try to find the thing I've lost Just when the search is over I lose it again". In the third group the poem goes to I'd rather be water but then fire as well. The poem overall was very good but I could not find out what "I" was even though it had hints and imagery. I think that this poem was very good.

Both of these poems were interesting. I liked them both.

lymerics

There once was a lamb from ripplesaw,
who always said meh and not bah,
it was all alone,
the meh was a moan
so one day it learned to la.


When these things go all all wrong,
we should be going along,
but where to go,
there but so
we will all be singing a song.


I had gone for a little spider,
but it was one little glider,
then another came,
they were much the same,
together made them one powerful fighter.

rap

Yo my name is better than you,
cause your rap is totally boo.
then there's the fact,
that you totally lacked.
your below me, I'm above all,
and I don't need to rap

I'm blasting the bass,
and the cello in case.
you can try to be me,
but you've lost already
I left you behind,
so make up your mind.

Just quit this,
you'll try but miss.
I won in every way,
there's nothing you can do today.
and as I said,
I don't need to rap,
so I won't.